| Re: Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
10-Feb-03/1:27 PM |
Still perverting the minds of the you I see Smiley. -10-
P.S. on a side note I have heard that scarfing does give a male an instant hard on. Just thought I'd share.
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| Re: a comment on Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
10-Feb-03/12:12 PM |
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What??? No comments on my lack of knowledge?? No insults about my spelling? The voice of truth/reason not putting me down? I'm amazed. No, no I don't believe it. Tell me what you really think smiley(even though I have noticed the lack of a zero here, of which is unusual). <-I'm glad you like it(even if, yes I'm saying this before anyone else does, I still think its not that great).
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| Re: Ghost Girl by wordontheverge |
8-Feb-03/10:10 PM |
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Ummm... But in a good way so -10-
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| Re: The Stand... an off rip by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/8:41 PM |
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Ahhhh!!! Test tube monkeys eating brain!!! The Pain, The Horror, Oh The Pain!!!
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| Re: a comment on As I lay by Katie |
3-Feb-03/3:43 AM |
THANKS!!
I Thought It was just a mistake my name not being on the list but then angain it could have been you just hadn't read any of my poems yet but i appreciate the gesture.
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| Re: As I lay by Katie |
2-Feb-03/4:45 AM |
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Could be better. Have you read I'm a snob by zero? i think it was zero but the point is you used almost everything he mentions about pimple poems(guilty of that myself). Try reading that then coming back and revising this one. -6-
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| Re: wanker by w~* ATHENA *~w |
2-Feb-03/4:32 AM |
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That gellar part is just outta left field some where and its not like the rest of the poem is tied together very well either so enjoy your zero.
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| Re: Slow motion by INTRANSIT |
2-Feb-03/4:23 AM |
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| Re: NASA Fireworks by TheDevil |
2-Feb-03/4:22 AM |
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A big zero for taste. In fact I'd give it two if i could.
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| Re: Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog |
2-Feb-03/1:16 AM |
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Zzinnia66 are you inbreed??? Cause this poems great and well you do leave alot of comments that have absolutly nothing to do with either the poem you post to or even the topic of the comments posted.
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| Re: Slow motion by INTRANSIT |
1-Feb-03/7:28 PM |
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Makes a good poening to a story but not much of a poem by itself. It needs more. I'll vote when you add to it.
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| Re: a comment on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik |
1-Feb-03/4:09 PM |
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I know how that goes. I change songs as I'm playing them too. I still think the way you say it in the song is cooler than the way its written here just because its a bit more descriptive.
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| Re: Run Forest! Run... by Bachus |
1-Feb-03/3:03 PM |
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Hehehehe Thats twice in one day you made me laugh. -8-
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| Re: Dancers of the Night by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/3:00 PM |
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Wait smoke wants darkness to end? Smoke causes Darkness. Other than that i like it -7-
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| Re: Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus |
1-Feb-03/2:51 PM |
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Ahahahahahahahahahahaha. Wait nope Ahahahahahahahahahahahaha still funny.
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| Re: Confession by marvelis |
1-Feb-03/2:37 PM |
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Much better than your other two. -9-
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| Re: Great Waters of End by marvelis |
1-Feb-03/2:34 PM |
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This seems like a longer version of life. Which wouldn't be so bad but It feels like your just saying the same things over and over again. -5- Try making this shorter or life longer.
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| Re: Life by marvelis |
1-Feb-03/2:24 PM |
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Uh??? I've read this Over and over again and it just doesn't make much sense to me. -3-
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| Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar |
1-Feb-03/1:20 PM |
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This is Great. Almost funnier than the T-Shirt.
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| Re: a comment on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/3:23 AM |
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Its was just a suggestion, Here have another. Well maybe you could use gomez run! more in the start and gomez run away! towards the middle and gomez run away now! towards the end. Then your still intensify the using your "chorus" and they stay.
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