Re: A Little Nightmare by Teen14	31-Jan-03/4:52 PM
Your close to caputing it but maybe a few less gomez runs at the beginning so that you build a sort of increasing frenzy.
Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin	31-Jan-03/4:47 PM
Next time try Drinking Vodka open cupboard, grab bottle sit back and enjoy
Re: a comment on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik	31-Jan-03/4:38 PM
I noticed that in the song its "Frankenstien is teaching kindergarden in the vally Count Dracula sould his fangs to the Japanese The Wolf man went Ivy League..." and so on and so forth. Sounds very trippy much better in the song. Thanks.
Re: Jesus rides the comet by Shardik	31-Jan-03/12:17 PM
Got to agree with razorgrin this is quite swell.
Re: Elegy by Quarton	31-Jan-03/12:13 PM
Only one word is needed to describe this. Good!
Re: Equality by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/12:09 PM
I know I don't have any room to talk but I don't know the "so run far and pray your feet be swift be quick witted" just Doesn't seem to fit in well.
Re: a comment on Perversions by razorgrin	30-Jan-03/11:23 AM
as you have you have noted i am one to get lost in the haste of the momment so i'll be egarly waiting fo it to to be posted.
Re: a comment on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar	29-Jan-03/6:07 PM
i have another fun game for them to play its called russian roulette? Any takers?
Re: a comment on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar	29-Jan-03/6:04 PM
What next D.A. you want to give me a spelling lesson?
Re: A Green Moons Haze by pink_punk_kisses87	29-Jan-03/5:29 PM
I agree its a ten but you might change threw to through. It'd make it so that someone didn't mentally trip over your words, unless that was what you were going for.
Re: A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf	29-Jan-03/5:24 PM
Been there done that and i like this one. So i give you an dime.
Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger	29-Jan-03/5:20 PM
Wow were screwed up fairy tale you got there but i liked it till i got to the captain part but it got good again with the wolf so here is a great big Eight
Re: ending by Limness	29-Jan-03/5:16 PM
must not have been hidden to well if you found it but nice as far as a Haiku goes so I give it a 9. P.S. Add the words "in Bed" to all your fortunes cookie sayings and they take on a whole new meaning.
Re: Until by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:32 PM
Very sweet. I'm a sucker for break ups so its an 8.
Re: Xmas gifts list by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:30 PM
original. strange but original. bsed soley on that a ten.
Re: me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:27 PM
your a Mondern Day Confusus
Re: The Birds by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:18 PM
not your best work but still interesting so i'll give it a 7
Re: The poemranker desk by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:16 PM
I know its probably just one of those random things seeing as to how this was here before i even joined poemranker but your first "dootle" looks like a bunny and this is just so cool so 10
Re: Breaking Away by wickedemon4	29-Jan-03/3:15 PM
Great feeling behind your words but you got a little abstract toward the end. Kin would also sound cooler if you replaced it with breathern <- (Probably mispelled that but who cares). I give it a nine.
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	29-Jan-03/2:51 PM
such depth i wouldn't even dare to try and phathom the the meaning but some how it sings to my soul. Execellent poem.