| Re: Too Much by intheailse |
21-Mar-03/12:41 PM |
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I like the ryhme scheme. Plus the flow of the words isn't that bad. Fairly good. -7-
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| Re: A Little Peace by intheailse |
21-Mar-03/12:35 PM |
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Drivel. oh umm... no... wait... Yeah, just plain drivel. There just isn't anything here. Not trying to be mean but you are way too vague. Who do you want to kiss your eyes? What are you afraid of the dark? Are you just trying to be confusing and pointless in your second stanza? A little peace of/from what? When your poem answers those questions (Or at least some of them) then I'll try and rate you better. For now (hopefully without hard feelings) I give this a -3-. Rewrite it and I'll be happy to give you a higher score.
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| Re: smiles from heaven by mckenzie |
21-Mar-03/12:24 PM |
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Touching. I suggest you go over it and fix your typos(by rereading it because spell check misses alot <like angle in the 2nd line>). As It stands -8-
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| Re: a comment on Who am I? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
21-Mar-03/12:14 PM |
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So glad you aprove D.A. :)
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| Re: A Tale of Peter Pan by NewbieMe |
10-Mar-03/2:09 PM |
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Damn cigarette advertisers got to petey too eh? Great job I enjoyed this one. -10-
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| Re: PC by NewbieMe |
10-Mar-03/2:07 PM |
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Yep. Or else the mouse freezes up. Creative. -10-
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| Re: Music Box by scornofangels |
10-Mar-03/2:00 PM |
Nice ryhme scheme but the rest of its trite and dull.
No offence but -6- is all your gonna get out of me on this one. And 2 of those points are for the title.
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| Re: A teenager's thoughts on Waking up. by Jarah |
27-Feb-03/1:38 PM |
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Oi!! How many times has that happened to me. -10-
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| Re: sick and demented by sk8boardandpoems |
25-Feb-03/6:58 PM |
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You managed to entrall my attention till the end with a tedious and unrefined grasp till the part about "examine the murder weapon". Then you derailed me back to not caring about your outcome. Your beginning could use work as well. -6-
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| Re: Agent Orange by Fear of Garbage |
25-Feb-03/6:45 PM |
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| Re: a comment on REALITY by NewbieMe |
23-Feb-03/3:23 PM |
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Wow!! A human angle. How odd. There is nothing wrong with Diet Coke D.A. and I'm sorry kids made funny of you. Yeah... Well buck up lad lifes not all bad and all that bloody nonsense, sorry if you took my get a life comment overly harshly and watch your insulin levels. I actually like seeing your name posted around here telling us what morons we are so... Thanks for being the bugger that you are D.A.
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| Re: THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand |
22-Feb-03/3:14 PM |
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Wow I didn't know that I was so well known on this site to be included in something like this. I'm touched even though you have me connected with D.A. and I'm not a gay. -10-
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| Re: Ballet by famenglory |
22-Feb-03/2:58 PM |
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Hmmm. I'm sleeping third row center right behind the old lady with the bad perm. -7-
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| Re: a comment on At A Loss by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/2:54 PM |
You asked and I was bored so no prob.
Oh yeah sorry I didn't think that I left any gender bias responses but I apologize if I did and just so you know I'm a he.
Have a nice day :)
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| Re: a comment on REALITY by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/2:49 PM |
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P.S. He doesn't like me and I don't care one way or the other for D.A.
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| Re: a comment on REALITY by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/2:47 PM |
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No he just goes to my most recent comments in my profile and then goes to put a comment anywhere that I have more than a one word reply.
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| Re: a comment on REALITY by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/2:44 PM |
Well, well, well if it isn't D.A., I had thought you dropped off the face of the earth and hit a rock.
How you doing squirt? As for the dumbest comment ever... I'm sure I've posted dumber. You work too hard at stalking my comments to try and insult me. Your too interested in what a moron like me has to say D.A.
Get a life :)
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| Re: Everyday Implied But Never Declared by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:45 AM |
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Sad but I see this scenario played out everyday.
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| Re: Have You Ever Felt That? by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:43 AM |
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| Re: Are You? by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:42 AM |
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You write well considering this isn't your native Language. Now onto this poem, It lacks any real emotion. Its just the thoughts that go with suicide. The human thought process is better left in a classroom or a debate forum.
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