Re: Eternal Waiting by darkhelmet10	22-Mar-03/9:07 PM
You win a BEEN THERE BEFORE LIFE GETS BETTER AWARD. No really trust me. Compare this to a poem I wrote called Idiot Box. -10-
Re: Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10	22-Mar-03/9:05 PM
So many mixed messages. Think for yourselfs/done with military command. No good/no evil. Sin/Maybe no sin. loved it. -8-
Re: Relentless by GekoHawaii	22-Mar-03/9:00 PM
The way that your words talk about being pulled to different sides and then your eyes feel like they are being pulled to the other side of the page,*gasp for breathe* is absoluty genius. I'm creating a new award just for you. You get the BOORAH GRANDMA AWARD and the SWEET NEVER BEFORE AWARD. -10- and -10- But seeing as to how I only have one vote... You only get -10-
Re: Cursed by GekoHawaii	22-Mar-03/8:52 PM
All things have a price and sometimes we just can't afford what we truely want. This gets the I BEEN THERE LIFE GET BETTER AWARD. -10-
Re: The Currency of Blood by Blindproject217	22-Mar-03/8:48 PM
Nice use of the heroic couplet.
Re: a comment on Idiot Box by thepinkbunnyofdoom	22-Mar-03/8:44 PM
The only two things linking that song with Idiot Box are That thry both say T.V., and Screen(linking them by their radiance). Plus that I wrote it when I was at A church camp. Other than that Nadda. This song looks familer to me. Is it DC Talk or the News Boys that wrote that? P.S. on a side note Dark Angel (and yes I know he hates that I don't do the -=_=- thing) was not very entertained by this poem.
Re: a comment on Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom	22-Mar-03/1:12 PM
I'll fix it but I liked angery better cause it went better title.
Re: W.A.R. by lunar	22-Mar-03/12:33 PM
Nice poem, Lunar. As Ranger said the motives of this war are suspect. I don't think its all about the oil, or even closely related to saving Iraqis, much less ending terrorism. Bush is probably using that so that he can keep people looking away from the whitehouse. Mr. Bush's excellent spin control has made him look nice and clean but he pushed for this war and then tryed to pull it off as if he had no other choice. -9-
Re: a comment on Gods Gift of Love by mckenzie	22-Mar-03/12:21 PM
Really?!? I would have assumed you'd have been the first person I could have called if my bum need put back together. Shame. * Only if its a spelling test(which by the count for about as much as one nights homework). Exams most People are so nervous that if they took off for every typo then most students wouldn't get beyond high school.(In America anyway.) * Well Oh Holy Shit where is Shakespearse's Application? How about Robert Burns <Oh wait by your accounts He is not Qualified>. What about (oh my god an American Writer) Mark Twain. He couldn't spell worth a shit and yet how many novels did he sell. * Yeah I agree but sometimes the case is far, far, worse. * Hmmm... D.A. You've been in quite a few arguments and I'm sure there are those people who don't make typos that get in arguments as well. There is no gaurantee what anyone will do on the internet. * Bait taken on that one. Yeah I guess I am a defensive retard but then again Wait... I've always been a defensive retard. I don't care about my insides (other than my lungs and liver <I want to keep those>). P.S. Knowledge without use is trival and wasted.
Re: charterhouse of dante by daniella	21-Mar-03/9:49 PM
Ftw is --111? -6-
Re: flaxen you by daniella	21-Mar-03/9:46 PM
No ryhme what so ever but good none the less. -7-
Re: in a singular way by daniella	21-Mar-03/9:44 PM
Nice. You write like someone who has either piloted before or spent hours endlessy facinated with flight. Either way -10- in my book.
Re: a comment on Gods Gift of Love by mckenzie	21-Mar-03/8:12 PM
Not as much or often as you'd think D.A.
Re: Gods Gift of Love by mckenzie	21-Mar-03/8:11 PM
Still a few grammatical errors but nowhere near as many as I usually make. Don't let D.A. get under ur skin, He thinks he knows everything. -9- and half If I could give one.
Re: a comment on A Little Peace by intheailse	21-Mar-03/1:19 PM
Yes in the end but I have to have at least a little information in order to work with.
Re: Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	21-Mar-03/1:13 PM
Yes, Yes, quite true. I was hoping for the hippie ways of sex, drugs, and peace to come back and say "hell no we won't go!" but no. -10-
Re: Exiting Shadows by Caducus	21-Mar-03/1:03 PM
Cliche done with class. Very well painted words Caducus. -10-
Re: Stoner Rant#1-Mnkypo's razor by Crakyamuni	21-Mar-03/12:57 PM
All depends on the artist and how well they hide the piece of art in question.
Re: Gods Gift of Love by mckenzie	21-Mar-03/12:51 PM
Its sorta overly redundant in places like 'smell your sweet smell' and 'thank god;god has let us recieve'. I like this. -8- P.S. You might want to fix your typos before anyone else rates this (trust me people do take off for that here).
Re: Tearing Me Apart (again) by intheailse	21-Mar-03/12:43 PM
Do you mean 'in your hand is my heart'. Good other than that. -8-