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Thanks For The Brain Damage (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Surounded. No retreat. Confused. Lost. Trapped. Tired. Give up. You win. No more. Mercy. Please. Love. Hate. Numb. Angry. Ignorant. Dumbfounded. Defeated. Cornered. Sold. Forgotten. Buried. Ashamed. Fucked. Falling. Burning. Bleeding. Torn. Dead. Empty.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.7615943
Overall Rank: 450
Posted: March 21, 2003 10:02 PM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2003 1:11 PM PST
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[5] Blindproject217 @ 68.86.0.162 | 22-Mar-03/12:58 PM | Reply
angery isnt a word
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 > Blindproject217 | 22-Mar-03/1:12 PM | Reply
I'll fix it but I liked angery better cause it went better title.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 28-Jun-03/9:39 PM | Reply
Girl poem. Written about how the oppsite sex has all these head games that men will never understand, and how I don't get them. They end up leaving me terribly confused and horribly angry for not getting the point.
[5] Sawa @ 12.229.220.155 | 22-Mar-03/11:41 PM | Reply
Reminds me of Gackt in his Malice Mizer stage.
[n/a] lunar @ 195.92.67.76 | 23-Mar-03/3:24 AM | Reply
yeah i know what u mean - well metaphorically anyway. Its the way some people can make u feel they often dont realise they are doing it or they do it on purpose because they want to hurt you and it works
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