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Thanks For The Brain Damage (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Surounded. No retreat. Confused. Lost. Trapped. Tired. Give up. You win. No more. Mercy. Please. Love. Hate. Numb. Angry. Ignorant. Dumbfounded. Defeated. Cornered. Sold. Forgotten. Buried. Ashamed. Fucked. Falling. Burning. Bleeding. Torn. Dead. Empty.

lunar 23-Mar-03/3:24 AM
yeah i know what u mean - well metaphorically anyway. Its the way some people can make u feel they often dont realise they are doing it or they do it on purpose because they want to hurt you and it works




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