| Re: Oil Spill by scitz |
12-Jun-03/1:15 PM |
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Very good, Sctz; more environmental poems, I say.
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| Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig |
11-Apr-03/12:30 PM |
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Great concept and very good poem (9); but, present yourself in the best light and spell it right, MP.
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| Re: la vieja loca con los gatos by <~> |
7-Apr-03/8:45 AM |
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Nicely done, Zzin; I could see this as a cat rap. Friends of mine clean carpets and had to work at a townhouse where the woman had over 100 cats and the whole place was layered in dreck like you wouldn't believe.
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| Re: a comment on selfish by <~> |
7-Apr-03/8:38 AM |
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And to think my brother's band is named 'Simple Man'!#! Dear ASM, please feel free to follow your own advice.
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| Re: F**K The World by loneshadow29 |
2-Apr-03/1:39 PM |
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LS, aren't you the guy in Richmond? Something in the water down there? Love the world, I say, every pluperferct participle of it. But, you make a strong case here, almost changed my mind.
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| Re: Wanna Be Porn Star. by spank me baby yeah |
1-Apr-03/1:58 PM |
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The movie 'Porn Star,' the story of a certain hedgehog, is now in a theater near you, SMBY.
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| Re: a comment on fever by <~> |
1-Apr-03/6:32 AM |
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| Re: fever by <~> |
31-Mar-03/2:02 PM |
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A myriad of pheromones abound, Zzin. After this past winter, many await the sun. Hmm, if only you'd worked 'sprang' in there, somehow.
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| Re: Conditional Sex by scitz |
29-Mar-03/4:35 PM |
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Damn good, Sctz. As a recently divorced person, I sure as shite don't want to go through this.
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| Re: Glare of Dawn by OneFingerAnswer |
29-Mar-03/4:31 PM |
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Excellent, OFA; especially 'Staring down the future'. The appropriate strewing of a smattering of commas will help your meaning.
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| Re: you will feel by nentwined |
28-Mar-03/2:05 PM |
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'as every...' is a strong line, Nntwnd. I think there's more to this poem in your head; I'd like to read it.
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| Re: Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8 |
26-Mar-03/10:48 AM |
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I disagree, Cdcs. Somewhere between the rambling 'Oxywarmonger,' by PAKI, and this oblique haiku is the right length and quality of poem to sum up the war in Iraq. Who on this site is up to writing it? Methinks Zzin or DA.
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| Re: The Battle by Birdman42s |
26-Mar-03/10:38 AM |
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I thought this would be about Iraq, Brdmn. If the battle is within, what's it over...alcoholism, violent urges, etc., or just the general evil potential within humans? And thanks, Nwb5, for your very cogent comments.
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| Re: Pathetic by openwounds |
24-Mar-03/1:50 PM |
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Very honest writing, Pnwnds. Yes, you'll never be good enough for them, and you'll never BE them. Maybe that's a good thing.
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| Re: Atlanta to Albany by powerline |
24-Mar-03/1:40 PM |
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SHEESH, finally, a real poem I can enjoy. Since I may be traveling to Albany (alBENNee, where my sister was born) via Atlanta, soon, this poem got my attention. Good for you, Pwrln, we need more of your sort on this site. I edit writing for a living, I'll help you out...it's 'reference'.
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| Re: Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Mar-03/1:11 PM |
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Good topical, socio-political poem, Jrm. It matters not how ridiculous antiwar protesters look, I'm more interested in their collective perspective for America and the world than that of Rumsfeld and Wolfowitz.
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| Re: For Pennies by Wulf |
20-Mar-03/9:02 AM |
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Moving, Wlf. A friend of my sons', Phil, just finished his initial Marines training; he'll likely be called up soon.
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| Re: footprint of the american chicken by bondjedi |
20-Mar-03/8:58 AM |
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...now, ladies. Bndjd, this is a haiku, and timely.
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| Re: Icarus Down by horus8 |
13-Mar-03/7:47 AM |
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I like it, H8; but spell it 'Separating'.
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| Re: Blustered by INTRANSIT |
13-Mar-03/7:45 AM |
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I like it just the way it is, INTRNST
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