on Oil Spill by scitz
12 Jun 2003, 1:15 PM
Very good, Sctz; more environmental poems, I say.
on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig
11 Apr 2003, 12:30 PM
Great concept and very good poem (9); but, present yourself in the best light and spell it right, MP.
on la vieja loca con los gatos by <~>
7 Apr 2003, 8:45 AM
Nicely done, Zzin; I could see this as a cat rap. Friends of mine clean carpets and had to work at a townhouse where the woman had over 100 cats and the whole place was layered in dreck like you wouldn't believe.
on F**K The World by loneshadow29
2 Apr 2003, 1:39 PM
LS, aren't you the guy in Richmond? Something in the water down there? Love the world, I say, every pluperferct participle of it. But, you make a strong case here, almost changed my mind.
on Wanna Be Porn Star. by spank me baby yeah
1 Apr 2003, 1:58 PM
The movie 'Porn Star,' the story of a certain hedgehog, is now in a theater near you, SMBY.
on Conditional Sex by scitz
29 Mar 2003, 4:35 PM
Damn good, Sctz. As a recently divorced person, I sure as shite don't want to go through this.
on Glare of Dawn by OneFingerAnswer
29 Mar 2003, 4:31 PM
Excellent, OFA; especially 'Staring down the future'. The appropriate strewing of a smattering of commas will help your meaning.
on you will feel by nentwined
28 Mar 2003, 2:05 PM
'as every...' is a strong line, Nntwnd. I think there's more to this poem in your head; I'd like to read it.
on Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8
26 Mar 2003, 10:48 AM
I disagree, Cdcs. Somewhere between the rambling 'Oxywarmonger,' by PAKI, and this oblique haiku is the right length and quality of poem to sum up the war in Iraq. Who on this site is up to writing it? Methinks Zzin or DA.
on The Battle by Birdman42s
26 Mar 2003, 10:38 AM
I thought this would be about Iraq, Brdmn. If the battle is within, what's it over...alcoholism, violent urges, etc., or just the general evil potential within humans? And thanks, Nwb5, for your very cogent comments.
on Pathetic by openwounds
24 Mar 2003, 1:50 PM
Very honest writing, Pnwnds. Yes, you'll never be good enough for them, and you'll never BE them. Maybe that's a good thing.
on Atlanta to Albany by powerline
24 Mar 2003, 1:40 PM
SHEESH, finally, a real poem I can enjoy. Since I may be traveling to Albany (alBENNee, where my sister was born) via Atlanta, soon, this poem got my attention. Good for you, Pwrln, we need more of your sort on this site. I edit writing for a living, I'll help you out...it's 'reference'.
on Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 1:11 PM
Good topical, socio-political poem, Jrm. It matters not how ridiculous antiwar protesters look, I'm more interested in their collective perspective for America and the world than that of Rumsfeld and Wolfowitz.
on For Pennies by Wulf
20 Mar 2003, 9:02 AM
Moving, Wlf. A friend of my sons', Phil, just finished his initial Marines training; he'll likely be called up soon.
on footprint of the american chicken by bondjedi
20 Mar 2003, 8:58 AM
...now, ladies. Bndjd, this is a haiku, and timely.
on Icarus Down by horus8
13 Mar 2003, 7:47 AM
I like it, H8; but spell it 'Separating'.