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fever (Haiku) by <~>
spring is in the air. wound down tight on pheromones i wait to be sprung.
Up the ladder: Freedom & Then some...
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.4
Weighted score: 6.7
Overall Rank: 517
Posted: March 31, 2003 12:21 PM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2003 12:21 PM PST
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[8] Frass @ 205.243.24.65 | 31-Mar-03/2:02 PM | Reply
A myriad of pheromones abound, Zzin. After this past winter, many await the sun. Hmm, if only you'd worked 'sprang' in there, somehow.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Frass | 31-Mar-03/2:09 PM | Reply
once i've been sprung, i will. alls i needs is a good muse, metaphorically speaking, of course.

watch for it.
[10] kthulah @ 80.230.47.221 | 31-Mar-03/8:18 PM | Reply
w00t!
[9] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/5:44 AM | Reply
fever in the morning,
fever running through my veins...you give me fever.

bom bom bom, you give me fever,

fever all through the night.


Sorry Z, Elvis fit over, top haiku.
[8] Frass @ 205.243.24.65 > Caducus | 1-Apr-03/6:32 AM | Reply
Elvis?
[8] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 | 1-Apr-03/7:09 AM | Reply
April is the cruellest month, and all that... now is the time when dangerous things can happen. Watch out!
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Christof | 1-Apr-03/7:15 AM | Reply
but May will be the most exciting, when the poets converge on London. It's looking like the last weekend in May, , Mr. Tof.
[8] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 > <~> | 1-Apr-03/7:25 AM | Reply
Bring on the London convergence! I'm at a wedding on the Friday, but the rest of the weekend looks free as a bird.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Christof | 1-Apr-03/7:32 AM | Reply
mark your calendar then. i expect to meet a female companion, as well!
[8] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 > <~> | 1-Apr-03/7:35 AM | Reply
I expect I'll persuade the wife to come along!
[7] Mr Pig (again) @ 195.92.194.16 | 1-Apr-03/10:11 AM | Reply
As I recall Elvis did sing 'Fever' with the Eden Perry band but thats another nut to polish. My dear spring truly is in the air, its in my step too after reading this. If you require my aid to spring you please call me on 0898-659-137698 : ask for Laurence.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Mr Pig (again) | 1-Apr-03/10:55 AM | Reply
ah, my pig!
perhaps you should attend the cavalcade of poets in may? for i'll be across the pond, and looking for guidance as to the best ales, ESBs and IPAs in town! Olde Cad knows the details. ta.

xo,

z
[9] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.107 | 1-Apr-03/10:35 AM | Reply
Pheromones and the peeling off of winter layers can create all sorts of interesting feelings...
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