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F**K The World

by loneshadow29

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Apr 2003 · 7 comments

f**k the world no one seems to care the retched inhabitants of this god-forsaken place no conscience, no remorse of the tragedies they bring war, violence, pestilence, death a slow destruction of the world bringing this all to bear upon their fellow man or woman their thoughts only of themselves never a moments thought of others hate be the language, violence its expression no love for the people of this world Love won't fill the hearts of the people only the murderous rage drives them the world will not need to wait for hell is the place we once called home

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[6] Frass 2-Apr-03/1:39 PM Reply
LS, aren't you the guy in Richmond? Something in the water down there? Love the world, I say, every pluperferct participle of it. But, you make a strong case here, almost changed my mind.
[n/a] loneshadow29 › Frass 3-Apr-03/8:24 PM Reply
Yup, that's me. The southern shadow hehe :) I agree, love the world, but I'm seein too much crap in the news, on the streets, and at school and it just seriously pissed me off. Funny how things go that way huh?
[n/a] poetandknowit 2-Apr-03/2:57 PM Reply
are you down in the dumps again?
[n/a] loneshadow29 › poetandknowit 3-Apr-03/8:26 PM Reply
Nope... not down in the dumps, although after a few trips you tend to stink, I've been doing well thank you very much. Just saw too much hate in the world and it just pissed me off. That's pretty much it.
[4] bondjedi 3-Apr-03/5:15 AM Reply
sometimes you f**k the world, and sometimes the world f**ks you
[n/a] horus8 3-Apr-03/12:51 PM Reply
What happened? Did they blow up your Indonesion Disco too?
[n/a] loneshadow29 › horus8 3-Apr-03/8:22 PM Reply
Nah... just seein too many people getting hurt, screwed (metaphorically speaking of course), abandoned, and abused... and the words just came out. Somebody blew up your Indonesion Disco? Damn dude that's harsh.