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F**K The World (Free verse) by loneshadow29 f**k the world
no one seems to care
the retched inhabitants
of this god-forsaken place
no conscience, no remorse
of the tragedies they bring
war, violence, pestilence, death
a slow destruction of the world
bringing this all to bear
upon their fellow man or woman
their thoughts only of themselves
never a moments thought of others
hate be the language, violence its expression
no love for the people of this world
Love won't fill the hearts of the people
only the murderous rage drives them
the world will not need to wait
for hell is the place we once called home
Up the ladder:
At Least I Love You
Down the ladder:
The windshield-wiper blues
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Posted: April 2, 2003 12:42 PM PST; Last modified: April 2, 2003 12:42 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7758822 Overall Rank: 11350 Comments:
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Frass @ 205.243.24.65
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2-Apr-03/1:39 PM
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LS, aren't you the guy in Richmond? Something in the water down there? Love the world, I say, every pluperferct participle of it. But, you make a strong case here, almost changed my mind.
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loneshadow29 @ 67.30.229.15
> Frass
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3-Apr-03/8:24 PM
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Yup, that's me. The southern shadow hehe :) I agree, love the world, but I'm seein too much crap in the news, on the streets, and at school and it just seriously pissed me off. Funny how things go that way huh?
are you down in the dumps again?
Nope... not down in the dumps, although after a few trips you tend to stink, I've been doing well thank you very much. Just saw too much hate in the world and it just pissed me off. That's pretty much it.
sometimes you f**k the world, and sometimes the world f**ks you
What happened? Did they blow up your Indonesion Disco too?
Nah... just seein too many people getting hurt, screwed (metaphorically speaking of course), abandoned, and abused... and the words just came out. Somebody blew up your Indonesion Disco? Damn dude that's harsh.
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