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The windshield-wiper blues

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 May 2003 · 7 comments

My old truck, she's gettin' kinda rusty hole in the roof inside's gettin' musty. I got the bloo-oos Got the windshield-wiper blues. Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield wiper blues. Loadin' my cars, tires start to spin losin' the traction slidin' down the ramps again I got the bloo-oos Got the windshield-wiper blues Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield-wiper blues. Well the speedo don't work neither do the lights Runnin' in the dark And I'm squintin' through the night! I got the bloo-oos Got the windshield-wiper blues Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield wiper blues. Intermission My old truck she's losin' the power My shop wants to fix her at Seven-ty-eight-bucks-an-how-er Got the bloo-oos Got those windshield-wiper blues Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield-wiper blues. listen man, can i borrow a hundred dollars? i'm jus' tryin' to get home.

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[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom 17-May-03/2:47 PM Reply
Whats a speedo working or not have to do with a truck? I'd give you the money to you if I wasn't planning on buying a drumset, 4 ounces of joy, and fixing my own car. -6-
[n/a] INTRANSIT › thepinkbunnyofdoom 17-May-03/5:21 PM Reply
ALL RIGHT EVERYBODY!!! THIS IS A FUCK-UP!!!!
THROW YOUR ASSES IN THE AIR OR I'LL BLOW YOUR HANDS AWAY!!!!!

now gimme yer dough.
[3] deleted user 17-May-03/4:00 PM Reply
The thing about the blues is you get to repeat everything and it's not much work, the work is in the scoring and instrumentals.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › deleted user 17-May-03/5:19 PM Reply
True enough. My poetry is better than my lyrics. This will surely become the best thing I have ever written. not.
[7] richa 18-May-03/7:26 AM Reply
i don't think this is a complete fuck up, I quite like the repetition and humour
[7] richa 18-May-03/7:26 AM Reply
i don't think this is a complete fuck up, I quite like the repetition and humour
[7] richa 18-May-03/7:26 AM Reply
i don't think this is a complete fuck up, I quite like the repetition and humour