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The windshield-wiper blues (Lyric) by INTRANSIT

My old truck, she's gettin' kinda rusty hole in the roof inside's gettin' musty. I got the bloo-oos Got the windshield-wiper blues. Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield wiper blues. Loadin' my cars, tires start to spin losin' the traction slidin' down the ramps again I got the bloo-oos Got the windshield-wiper blues Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield-wiper blues. Well the speedo don't work neither do the lights Runnin' in the dark And I'm squintin' through the night! I got the bloo-oos Got the windshield-wiper blues Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield wiper blues. Intermission My old truck she's losin' the power My shop wants to fix her at Seven-ty-eight-bucks-an-how-er Got the bloo-oos Got those windshield-wiper blues Can't afford no new shoes! Got those windshield-wiper blues. listen man, can i borrow a hundred dollars? i'm jus' tryin' to get home.

richa 18-May-03/7:26 AM
i don't think this is a complete fuck up, I quite like the repetition and humour




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