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Dr. Dr. (Free verse) by psikosis
1-800 suicide, oh, I want to be at your side. Your smell is intoxicating, now I sit anticipating... Trust me now, do you dare, come with me, without a care. Violence and fear humiliate, I just want to retaliate. Pounding out agressions, sadism has become my dark obsession. Driving my knife in your flesh, down inside, my feelings mesh. Blood pours down your skin, I know that I will win. Scream in pain, I'll take your life, I own you now, me and my knife.

Down the ladder: he's so good looking

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.1666665
Weighted score: 4.7758822
Overall Rank: 11347
Posted: May 21, 2003 6:04 AM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 6:04 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-May-03/6:20 AM | Reply
Turkey.
[8] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.67.213 | 21-May-03/10:39 AM | Reply
darwinism. suicide is so close to murder, they are like kentucky cousins. I recommend against eaither.
[1] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 21-May-03/3:42 PM | Reply
udder.
[n/a] QUENDO @ 195.157.153.253 | 29-May-03/2:49 AM | Reply
Bladder
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