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At Least I Love You

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Mar 2003 · Edited 13 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

You don't believe in yourself You have no faith in yourself You speak of suicide At least I love you You don't think you're talented But your guitar Your voice Your words Lead me to a different conclusion At least I love you You don't think you're special I see your friends Your smiling photographed memories At least I love you You don't think you make a difference You don't see the changes you've made in me You don't see how you inspire At least I love you? At least, I love you

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Mar-03/8:37 PM Reply

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You have stolen my heart away with your pure, simple words. Who needs fancifications like "writing in a style that isn't identical to prose but with random line breaks" or "non-default choice of words" or "a basic understanding of poetry"?! Obviously not you! You are so special that you have an innate mastery of the essence of poetry without even needing to read any other poems! You're so amazing that the last three thousand years of poetry is rendered irrelevent by your challenging, breakthrough work!

LOOK YOU STUPID BINT: YOU ARE A STUPID BINT.

[7] GekoHawaii 23-Mar-03/6:26 PM Reply

Thanks for the inspiring words. I have friends that tell me then same, though I still don't believe it.