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For Pennies (Free verse) by Wulf
A new soldier and a new day,
standing tall and freshly afraid
older at once.. wiser.. aware,
after boot.. there's monsters out there
He seems to be smiling but there's a new edge,
gonna be a Marine just like he said
There's something scary about being brave,
a lot of little pieces he's hoping to save
He comes to visit, to see mom and dad
She hugs her baby, happy and sad
tells his brothers of others, those who didn't make it
They slap his back proudly, knew he could take it
He takes the time to visit a girl
someone kinda special from his boyhood world
They sit together, he talks to her father
like swimming alone under dirty black water
She takes his hand, they go for a walk
She kisses his face, rather than talk
She hugs him goodbye, then hugs him again
the sweet tears of youth, where innocence ends
She tells him she's sorry, feels guilty as hell
for being so selfish, not loving him well
i tell her to tell him, she assures me she will
She cries on my shoulder, i am crying still
i am only a father, happy to be one
with daughters who are daughters, sons who are sons
wishing that soldiers weren't so very damned young
and daughters weren't sweethearts under the gun
They walk through the garden, stop at the well
She wishes for kisses, to be loved long and well
He wishes for someone to talk to, someone to tell
for pennies and lovers, for pennies and hell
The well is for wishes to hold and to keep
as dreams are for secrets alive in our sleep
Together they whisper, alone lovers weep
For pennies we hold them, for pennies to keep
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8559
Posted: March 19, 2003 8:48 PM PST; Last modified: March 19, 2003 8:48 PM PST
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