poemranker ::Oil Spill by scitz

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 49098

Oil Spill

by scitz

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 May 2003 · Edited 10 Jun 2003 · 5 comments

Tanker bleeds black death, Sonars fade to coral graves, birds lift heavy wings.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 5.44 weighted 5.22 rank 4322 views 219 View voting details →

9 votes so far. Yours would make 10.9 votes so far

5 comments

[7] richa 10-Jun-03/10:30 AM Reply
ok gets its point across
but stands as a list rather than a poem i think
[9] spank me baby yeah 10-Jun-03/12:10 PM Reply
Wow says a hell of a lot and makes you feel kinda angry at those exxon duders. 9
[8] horus8 10-Jun-03/12:42 PM Reply
Milk spill (Free verse) by spitz

Boob sprays clear death
Nipples grow to eager mouths.
Silicon breakfast.
[n/a] scitz › horus8 10-Jun-03/3:29 PM Reply
Yes Horus I like it and its very much dark angel.
[7] Frass 12-Jun-03/1:15 PM Reply
Very good, Sctz; more environmental poems, I say.