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Oil Spill (Free verse) by scitz
Tanker bleeds black death, Sonars fade to coral graves, birds lift heavy wings.

Up the ladder: Friend
Down the ladder: silent struggle

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4444447
Weighted score: 5.2222223
Overall Rank: 4326
Posted: May 14, 2003 8:53 AM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2003 9:23 AM PDT
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[7] richa @ 195.92.67.68 | 10-Jun-03/10:30 AM | Reply
ok gets its point across
but stands as a list rather than a poem i think
[9] spank me baby yeah @ 195.92.168.167 | 10-Jun-03/12:10 PM | Reply
Wow says a hell of a lot and makes you feel kinda angry at those exxon duders. 9
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Jun-03/12:42 PM | Reply
Milk spill (Free verse) by spitz

Boob sprays clear death
Nipples grow to eager mouths.
Silicon breakfast.
[n/a] scitz @ 195.92.168.168 > horus8 | 10-Jun-03/3:29 PM | Reply
Yes Horus I like it and its very much dark angel.
[7] Frass @ 205.243.24.65 | 12-Jun-03/1:15 PM | Reply
Very good, Sctz; more environmental poems, I say.
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