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Friend (Free verse) by MysticalRaven88 Somtimes at night,I lay awake and wonder.
About your smile,about your warmth,
About your caring thoughts.
About the wisdom you've given me,
About the colors you've shown me.
Midnight blue,its the color that reminds me of you.
The darkness of you is not frighting but soothing.
The gloomieness of you is not sad,but cheering.
You bring hope to my life,and show me there are obsticals,
but they can be over come.
Life was just one big mystery till you came along,
and lightend the path from night to day with your smiles,
and caring words.
Once was a wall,now is rumble at my feet,
broken down by love and warmth witch i'd never known befor.
Friendship was new to me,
it was a frighting thing.
But you took me by the hand,
and led me within.
Lighting ever darkend spot,
filling it with light.
Reminding me you were there,
forever filled with joy.
Midnight blue,is the color that reminds me of you,
for it is the time between,
Day and night
and all the frights and wonders of the world.
And the most precious thing that can be seen,
is the friendship that burns within,
all you have to do is look a little deeper,
and the color inside of you..will always shine threw.
~Melinda
Up the ladder:
Letter to a Friend
Down the ladder:
Oil Spill
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Posted: November 26, 2002 2:25 PM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2002 2:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2222223 Overall Rank: 4325 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 192.197.141.79
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26-Nov-02/2:47 PM
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is english not your first language? If it is,then you have an excuse for this atrocity of a poeme.
razorgrin seems mentally retarded he cant recognise good poetry, thenagian you should his, thats probably why
"she", not "he", buttfuck." thenagian"? you say " thenagian" and call me retarded? This is typical adoloescent slush and nothing more. I calls 'em like i sees 'em.
again fucking amazing how do u do it well i no longer h8 all americans your an exception
hate ot agree, just looks like we will ahve to hate rednecks instead, this little lady has charmed her way into my good books anyway
Hey guys I hate to break it to you, but God loves America. The American people love America. I love America. It seems to me that you two are the only ones with a problem. Like, go figure.
no no i have a problem too, however i think a large punnet of figs may solve it
I've had that problem too. May I suggest prunes?
no you most certainly mayn't!
america is shit cos of morons like you america is full of self righteous christians that think that every1 loves them (^dark angel) plus i h8 to break it to u but any1 with a scrap of philisophical intelligence doesnt believe in god i mean com on its all jus fear god u americans make me wanna kill sum1! (with the exception of u melinda u seem to be a minority in a place full of fukwits)
Jesus loves you.
you really no how to piss me off don u
Look Lark, I'm not trying to piss you off. America is a great country and a Christian nation. It is because we are Christians that the USA has been such a powerful force for peace across the world. And Jesus does love you, despite what you might think.
if you tell me jesus loves me one more time im burning a bible!
Ok I'm not going to tell you again. But just think about it. You're going to have to face it sooner or later.
lol america and peace of course and crusades was jsut a bunch of european jehovis witnesses who wouldnt go home (well attually that may be true but still americans are the most evil people in the world excluding melinda who we like)
whos up for a good old fashioned witch hunt, wait america started that, ok lets burn some communists because the want freedom from economic poverty, no wiat the americans did that too, sit the only thing we can do is shag our auntys and pigs, no wiat the red necks like jesus loving fucked up dark angel already have done that!!!
couldnt of put it better meself GO communism GO!
lark angel you do realise that jesus does love you mainly cause he wants ot get you into bed cause hes gay, no wait the americans have a corner in that market as well, is there anything the americans cant do (except be witty charming and inteligent obveously melinda is free of this statement)
WHOS UP FOR BURNING THE FLAG AND SOME BIBLES?
The only flag I'd burn is a flag with a picture of a bible burning on it. Or a flag with a picture of an American flag burning on it.
Or a flag depicting a flag depicting those flags being burned being burned.
Wrong. Jesus loves me because his love is everlasting and boundless. Have you not read the Bible, Sir? And I resent the implication that an American citizen would ever commit the sin of sodomy. Good day to you, Sir.
LOL!!! funny
What does LOL mean?
proof of your american origine
This is preposterous! Will you duel, or are you a coward?
indeed sir, i find you a vile pig and a man of dishonour, i bite my thumb at you and challenge you to pistols at dawn upon the moore (roger moore that is or prehaps patric)
Pistols nothing. It shall be monocles at dawn, on Fortesque Lawn.
Hey,thank you for ummm replying to my poem,and saying im a good american or whatever..but if my poem caused this..umm mess on here maybe I should take it off cause I don't like people arguing like this its really dissapointing:(..Please just get along...for me?
~Melinda
ok
Thank you so much:). If anyone wants to e-mail me you are more then welcome to,and if you have a messenger or w/e just lemme know if you wanna add me
my e-mail is hyperchick1988@msn.com and my aol name is HyperMel225 see ya ~Melinda
You sound like a really interesting, unique girl. Just imagine -- you're a HYPERCHICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I bet once you get started you never stop --because you're unstoppable! And cr4zy!!
if oyu dont mind i tihnk ill add you to my MSN and AOl if you dont mind
I dont mind.
~Melinda
oh dear oh dear oh dear, a prevert of the first waters. Be mindfull dear child he shall be proffering sweets from his deep dark pocket next. I on the other hand am a most pleasant kind of gentleman, would you like to see some puppies?
Take ==Doylum's hand without fear, my dear. I know him to be a most upstanding British gentleman of Impeccable Breeding and Gracious Conduct.
Hmmm,need a little help with somthing?
~Melinda
QUICK DOYLUM NOW GET HER INTO THE CAR
im lost the only thing i no for certain is that dark angel is red nek scum w8 a minute its all clear now thats all that matters
jesus. you guys get hard when the wind blows, don't you
This poem must be fucking brilliant if it can instigate such emotions in people. It definately doesn't deserve to be taken off.
If I may be so bold as to put forward my humble opinion, I don't disagree with Christianity. I'm not religious, because I'm not sure what to believe in. However, I don't agree that America is a force of peace across the world-in fact, America and the West contributes hugely to the world's problems. For example, how about Iraq? Sure Saddam is insane and dangerous, but America is so determined to invade for their own purposes that they are willing to endanger the world. And who is currently oppressing other Middle-Eastern nations so the only way they can respond is through terrorism? It seems obvious to me that the large percentage of America doesn't give a fuck about the outside world because they're happy to keep their cheap oil and not have to waste time saving the rainforest-and therefore the world. That's my rant over, sorry it took so long, but it's an issue I take very seriously, and would like to hear the American view on this. If I'm drastically wrong on this, then please let me know, but I don't think I am.
no its true but also they re xenophobic
Look I don't know what 'xenophobic' means, but all I can say is that America is a great nation and definitely is not 'xenophobic'.
Yeah, it is the melting pot after all.
Spoken like a true teenager. Hooray for boobies, and generic ideas of the world. Turn off the BBC and read a book so you do not sound like a dork.
America gave us Baywatch !
It also gave us David Hasselhoff ! America gave us Star Trek America gave us a fascinting insight on how to bury a cigar, America gave us Cowboys America gave us Hawaii five o and Magnum. Thank God almighty real or not for giving us a big fuckoff ocean to seperate us, hey guys who fucking cares theirs only 1 American I gotta problem with and he thinks Macedonias a fucking dance at a wedding. rest, deep breath, Think of John Lennon, and congratulate each other on breaking the 'Guiness book of records' for the most comments on any poetry website ( hey if thats true melinda 50/50s fair huh?
that second paragraph may upset a lot of people, although it could get ignored, who knows. I think birthmark may well wade in he's an anglophobe don't ye know
hey guys, know what? the poem this is attached to sucks moose balls.
HAAHAAHAA!!!
Who was P&K referring to when he told whoever it was to turn off the BBC? Was it me or Red Neck. It was probably me. Does this mean we're not allowed opinions? Please educate me in America's purposes in their actions in the Middle East. I really need to know just why I sound like a dork.
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