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Friend (Free verse) by MysticalRaven88

Somtimes at night,I lay awake and wonder. About your smile,about your warmth, About your caring thoughts. About the wisdom you've given me, About the colors you've shown me. Midnight blue,its the color that reminds me of you. The darkness of you is not frighting but soothing. The gloomieness of you is not sad,but cheering. You bring hope to my life,and show me there are obsticals, but they can be over come. Life was just one big mystery till you came along, and lightend the path from night to day with your smiles, and caring words. Once was a wall,now is rumble at my feet, broken down by love and warmth witch i'd never known befor. Friendship was new to me, it was a frighting thing. But you took me by the hand, and led me within. Lighting ever darkend spot, filling it with light. Reminding me you were there, forever filled with joy. Midnight blue,is the color that reminds me of you, for it is the time between, Day and night and all the frights and wonders of the world. And the most precious thing that can be seen, is the friendship that burns within, all you have to do is look a little deeper, and the color inside of you..will always shine threw. ~Melinda

razorgrin 27-Nov-02/6:57 AM
"she", not "he", buttfuck." thenagian"? you say " thenagian" and call me retarded? This is typical adoloescent slush and nothing more. I calls 'em like i sees 'em.




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