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Letter to a Friend (Free verse) by Reuben Spiteri Looking at a mirror
Seeing your tool
Don't be blind
That is not you
Find yourself brother
You are inside
The body is the carrier
Of your Divine Light
Take care of your carrier
But decorate your light
As when you leave this world
The vessel is left behind
But the knowledge and wisdom
From them you never part
So decorate your spirit
To this life you are not bound
Up the ladder:
calendared
Down the ladder:
Friend
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Posted: October 7, 2002 9:03 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 9:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2222223 Overall Rank: 4324 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.81
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8-Oct-02/12:21 AM
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Good!I like the rhythm.enjoyed reading it twice.9
the fox and the hound....did this subject more justice. my forehead furrows mr. spiteri.6.
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