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Letter to a Friend (Free verse) by Reuben Spiteri

Looking at a mirror Seeing your tool Don't be blind That is not you Find yourself brother You are inside The body is the carrier Of your Divine Light Take care of your carrier But decorate your light As when you leave this world The vessel is left behind But the knowledge and wisdom From them you never part So decorate your spirit To this life you are not bound

vulcan 8-Oct-02/12:21 AM
Good!I like the rhythm.enjoyed reading it twice.9




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