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footprint of the american chicken (Haiku) by bondjedi
please mister bush, sir don't kill my mommy with guns she is all I have

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1666667
Weighted score: 4.506941
Overall Rank: 12784
Posted: March 20, 2003 2:28 AM PST; Last modified: March 20, 2003 2:28 AM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 20-Mar-03/6:51 AM | Reply
now that ruins my fun!!!
get out of my sandbox!!!
you have one minute to get out, or i'll, or i'll...
i'll...

all right, you have one MORE minute, but then, i'm going to get really, really mad!
[1] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 | 20-Mar-03/6:55 AM | Reply
guns are the least of your problems if you're in iraq right now. otherwise, i think you'll be ok. are you in high school, by the way? this has all the subtley and eloquence of what one might write in the 9th grade.

Duck and Cover! 1 swastika for you, hippie! Peace is for Pussies!
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > UnityMitford | 20-Mar-03/6:57 AM | Reply
i've been called worse!!!
[1] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 > <~> | 20-Mar-03/7:57 AM | Reply
and by me, no less, turdboss.
[8] Frass @ 205.243.24.65 | 20-Mar-03/8:58 AM | Reply
...now, ladies. Bndjd, this is a haiku, and timely.
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