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Leave (Free verse) by Luv2write You always leave
When you're winning
The argument
You always leave
When I'm too shy
To think of anything to say
You always leave
When you get bored
Of talking to me
You always leave
When I get nervous
And feel like I want to leave
You always leave
When I'm scared
And I'm only safe
Wrapped in your arms
You always leave
When you realize
I might be right for you
You always leave
When I need you
To tell me things are alright
You always leave
When you're upset
And I'm alone again
You always leave
When I need someone
You think it'll be someone else
You always leave
When I work up the courage
To tell you
I
Love
You
Up the ladder:
footprint of the american chicken
Down the ladder:
SomeOne Special
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.1666667
Posted: March 23, 2003 7:44 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2003 7:47 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.506941 Overall Rank: 12780 Comments:
Wow, who turned out the punctuation?
One thing comes to mind: Wrg. It's what you say when your brain goes numb from either confusion or repetition. This one's not confusing at all, so you can finish the math from there.
Again a nice twist...though it does get a little repetitive before you get there...
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oh, wait, i get it, it's a satire, and you're making fun of 12 steppers!!! in that case, schwing!!!!