on Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}>
16 May 2003, 5:29 AM
Lucky never slept with his mom. That's ridiculous.
on form: haibun by Poetsettle
16 May 2003, 5:27 AM
sma ll typo "shes" but a lovely poem.
on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
16 May 2003, 5:26 AM
nice toy theme, an excellent sense of playfulness
on Jokie Smurf by Bachus
16 May 2003, 5:26 AM
I like it.
replying on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
21 Mar 2003, 5:59 AM
Apparetnly I am in some sort of a minority here suggesting some revision, but the redundancies in the first few haiku with "lost" rpeated and "loss" being so similar I figured you could probably come up with something fresher...same with "dawn".
replying on Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT
18 Mar 2003, 9:53 AM
grow up.
on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
14 Mar 2003, 6:49 AM
Grated dead would be funny, too. like parmesan.
on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus
14 Mar 2003, 6:48 AM
I liked it OK. the part about never getting "laid" sounds common.
on advice for the heated by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 9:54 AM
cute and suggestive.
on You'd think by ~incarnate~
13 Mar 2003, 9:53 AM
4-6-6 ?
Do over.
Do over.
on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
13 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
work out redundancies...
on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni
13 Mar 2003, 9:48 AM
weak
on Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29
13 Mar 2003, 9:47 AM
somebody bored? Don't like history class?
on Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29
13 Mar 2003, 9:45 AM
keep trying. avaoid cliche's that sound like elton john songs.
on Coloured waifs home by horus8
13 Mar 2003, 9:44 AM
OK
on Got Balls? by Yardbird
13 Mar 2003, 9:42 AM
tasty. sounds chewy.
on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum
13 Mar 2003, 9:41 AM
what a chewy lumpo of dung. also not a haiku.
on Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles
13 Mar 2003, 9:39 AM
I get it.