Re: Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}>	16-May-03/5:29 AM
Lucky never slept with his mom. That's ridiculous.
Re: form: haibun by Poetsettle	16-May-03/5:27 AM
sma ll typo "shes" but a lovely poem.
Re: Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus	16-May-03/5:26 AM
nice toy theme, an excellent sense of playfulness
Re: Jokie Smurf by Bachus	16-May-03/5:26 AM
I like it.
Re: a comment on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer	21-Mar-03/5:59 AM
Apparetnly I am in some sort of a minority here suggesting some revision, but the redundancies in the first few haiku with "lost" rpeated and "loss" being so similar I figured you could probably come up with something fresher...same with "dawn".
Re: a comment on Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT	18-Mar-03/9:53 AM
grow up.
Re: Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin	14-Mar-03/6:49 AM
Grated dead would be funny, too. like parmesan.
Re: The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus	14-Mar-03/6:48 AM
I liked it OK. the part about never getting "laid" sounds common.
Re: advice for the heated by <~>	13-Mar-03/9:54 AM
cute and suggestive.
Re: You'd think by ~incarnate~	13-Mar-03/9:53 AM
4-6-6 ? Do over.
Re: The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer	13-Mar-03/9:52 AM
work out redundancies...
Re: this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni	13-Mar-03/9:48 AM
weak
Re: Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29	13-Mar-03/9:47 AM
somebody bored? Don't like history class?
Re: Pinjur by Shardik	13-Mar-03/9:46 AM
god with a small i. catchy.
Re: Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29	13-Mar-03/9:45 AM
keep trying. avaoid cliche's that sound like elton john songs.
Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8	13-Mar-03/9:44 AM
OK
Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird	13-Mar-03/9:42 AM
tasty. sounds chewy.
Re: Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum	13-Mar-03/9:41 AM
what a chewy lumpo of dung. also not a haiku.
Re: Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles	13-Mar-03/9:39 AM
I get it.
Re: Beer by Yardbird	13-Mar-03/9:38 AM
the title gives too much away and makes it ordinary.