poemranker ::form: haibun by Poetsettle

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Haiku № 49089

form: haibun

by Poetsettle

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 May 2003 · 3 comments

Loveliness beyond singing the song stews long, long for many days _staccato_ from that rhythmic place for weeks. A symphony begins, shes smiles happy infant croons and does not flail, clawing air grasping life, she grins she sleeps.

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[8] horus8 14-May-03/9:24 PM Reply
Virginia, when you eventually come out from underneath all of those shiny poetry medals and Heretofores. I will still be here, stripped of my many almost poetic awards. Naked, reading the paper. Waiting for you to fix me a hero's sandwich, and organize my confetti parade for the new world record setting yawn I've just let loose.
[7] hipster flare 16-May-03/5:27 AM Reply
sma ll typo "shes" but a lovely poem.
[n/a] Poetsettle › hipster flare 18-May-03/10:40 AM Reply
Thank you for copyediting.