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form: haibun (Haiku) by Poetsettle

Loveliness beyond singing the song stews long, long for many days _staccato_ from that rhythmic place for weeks. A symphony begins, shes smiles happy infant croons and does not flail, clawing air grasping life, she grins she sleeps.

hipster flare 16-May-03/5:27 AM
sma ll typo "shes" but a lovely poem.




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