Re: Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me by EggbertShootsFire	1-Oct-03/9:54 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Re: Concrete by beakism	1-Oct-03/9:54 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Re: Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties by Luzr	1-Oct-03/9:55 AM
a boat? I like it.
Re: Answered Prayers by Pooh_N_His_Honey	1-Oct-03/9:55 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Re: Was/Were You? by Alyssa91	1-Oct-03/9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader. This is a dumb poem. Sorry.
Re: this tuesday morning by teacup	1-Oct-03/9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Re: Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey	1-Oct-03/9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Re: Every single days's the same (Acrostic) by [mojo]	1-Oct-03/9:57 AM
is acrostic concrete?
Re: Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL	1-Oct-03/10:02 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/10:03 AM
pointy. are you suggesting that the only way home is by going down? is home hell?
Re: Jingoism saved the wingnut by horus8	1-Oct-03/11:31 AM
cowboys are nifty.
Re: Her Light by wunboi	1-Oct-03/11:31 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/11:33 AM
don't quite get the picture. a vase? maybe if you want it to be a pin you should have all the words be vertical like: P R I C K !
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/11:33 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-03/8:28 AM
somewhat sappy. perhaps more of a pimple pome?
Re: First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend	24-Oct-03/9:19 AM
nicely done
Re: John Denver's hang-glider by horus8	30-Oct-03/6:11 AM
An excellent Poem (But I do believe it is "Hang" Glider) It reminded me of a thing I read in a book somewhere--where a man was about to drown and was rescued at the last moment. He was upset because he finally was about to find out what it feels like to be a drowning man, and he was now robbed of that experience.
Re: I have no problem with short people of color or religion by horus8	30-Oct-03/6:48 AM
an excellent social commentary.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Dec-03/10:11 AM
me too.
Re: IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria	10-Mar-04/11:30 AM
This is a place to share poetry and get feedback, not a place to voice your teenage problems that seem so big to you now. Get a counselor or something.