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IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD (Free verse) by little_angel_maria FUCK LIFE,
FUCK LOVE,
FUCK YOU
WHY?
LOGAN I HOPE YOU DONT CHEAT ON ME CAUSE YOUR ALl THE BLOODY SAME
I THINK YOU POEMRANKER PEOPLE ARE SO RUDE ALL YOU DO IS SAY RUDE FUCKING
COMMENTS YOU DONT SAY LISTEN ITS NOT GOOD BUT LET ME HELP YOU HUH THATS
TEAMWORK WE'RE ALL SUPPOSED TO BE FRIENDS...
FRIENDS THERE IS NO SUCH THING THEY ALL TALK BEHIND YOUR BACK AND BE
RUDE ABOUT YOU JUST BECAUSE THEY'RE CEALOUS
Up the ladder:
You
Down the ladder:
this can be no more than shit
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Posted: November 27, 2002 12:26 PM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 12:26 PM PSTWeighted score: 3.5378828 Overall Rank: 13593 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 192.197.142.45
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27-Nov-02/1:22 PM
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nobody cares. seriously. tell it to him instead instead of cluttering up the site with your bullshit. Wait until you have real problems, kiddo. they exist. even worse than boyfriends and pimples. until then, 0.
here, let me help you...take your bike seat and 90 degree it...there..that's better..now let's see if we can't get you to ride without your training wheels soon.3.
may i remind you that it is an offence to drink and drive, no matter what form of perambulation is used. And to compound this i don't belive shes old enough to be pissed
How unseemly.
Theres some genuine emotion there, but I don't care for the imagery. Welcome to Life.
friendsreunited.com
yes
Ah, leave her the fuck alone you callous basterds. If you haven't got anything nice to say SHUT THE FUCK UP!
thnank u mikius all of you shut the fuck up ok god you have no fucking idea what i am going through u all have perfect lives well guess what i dont that is why eminem is my best friend we have got the sam shit in our lives
Loads of people have problems. Find a focus--like really writing good poems. You can be emotional without being immature. Look for beauty in your situation and write about that.
The purpose of this site is to submit your poetry to be critiqued and voted upon. it's not a support group for whiny brats who don't have any real problems. If she writes a piece of utter shite, then she'll get the votes and comments that go along with it. if she wants group hugs, she may take her shit elsewhere.
1. Eminem has probably never met you, doesn't know you and wouldn't care.
2. When you are on poem ranker for a little while you'll understand that a large percentage of the population on this site are out of their teens and as such do not -because of even bigger problems- remember what it was to be a teenager with only pimples and boys as your biggest problem. 3. You will see in time that you will get over it and it may seem like a big deal now, in fact, it is a big deal but give yourself at least 2 more years and you'll consider your actions very stupid. But when that happens, don't forget how you dealt with your problem and expand on how much better you can solve your problem. 4. You're in the teen years, everything rubs you the wrong way, it's a known fact. Take this from someone who just turned 18 and is considered a little too wise for her own good. Hey I liked your resolutions on the year 2003 by the way. stick to them.
This is a place to share poetry and get feedback, not a place to voice your teenage problems that seem so big to you now. Get a counselor or something.
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