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You (Free verse) by sk8boardandpoems
The sound of your voice brings comfort to me. The smile on your face makes me all warm inside. The sound of your laughter makes me want to laugh. The cheer in your voice makes me want to smile. I dont know how it happened? You were always so happy! One thing lead to another and then you were gone! The look on yuor face when yo said goodbye, makes me want to kill myself! The feelings that i felt make me want to disappear. The way that you left me makes me want to go with you! I want you to come back and take me with you. But thats never going to happen so i guess i'll take matters into my ownhands......I'll see you sooner than you think..... You

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5384614
Weighted score: 3.5482433
Overall Rank: 13587
Posted: February 25, 2003 5:24 AM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2003 5:24 AM PST
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[2] Crakyamuni @ 131.252.231.169 | 3-Jan-05/3:22 PM | Reply
Have you met crystal lane swift?
[4] Glasseyez @ 204.49.132.59 | 9-Feb-06/8:59 PM | Reply
A little more content, your quote unquote poems do seem more on the demented side like you have big issues with people leaving you and you want to kill them.........thats what i get from this
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