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Join With Me (Free verse) by Jody Conn
I want to hear your breath quicken and feel your nipples harden against mine Lay with me in the darkness Gently stroking what is yours now As I explore the warmth of your folds My fingers deeper into your moist treasure You surrender as I enter Two becoming one, the beast with two backs Your heartbeat and mine become one rhythm The rhythm of love, the rhythm of life We are close now, you and I Softness and hardness united in one goal We are there now, two quakes, two exhausted and too weak Come now, join with me jc062701
Up the ladder: Why...
Down the ladder: You
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5384614
Weighted score: 3.5482433
Overall Rank: 13586
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST
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Comments:
[2]... anonymous @ | 30-Jun-01/9:22 PM | Reply
this must be about doing the laundry
[2]... anonymous @ | 8-Jul-01/1:06 PM | Reply
the beast with two backs, eh? othello... well done..
[2]... anonymous @ | 15-Jul-01/10:40 PM | Reply
Reminds me of the first time my lover and I made love...:)
[2]... anonymous @ | 10-May-02/6:04 PM | Reply
Some people write entire novels of this stuff and get paid. You should consider doing that instead of trying to pass this off as poetry.
[2]... anonymous @ 203.134.26.2 | 13-May-02/5:20 AM | Reply
No thanks.
[6] shwenatjadeflower @ 68.12.149.5 | 12-Jul-02/1:05 AM | Reply
sexy.
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