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Join With Me (Free verse) by Jody Conn

I want to hear your breath quicken and feel your nipples harden against mine Lay with me in the darkness Gently stroking what is yours now As I explore the warmth of your folds My fingers deeper into your moist treasure You surrender as I enter Two becoming one, the beast with two backs Your heartbeat and mine become one rhythm The rhythm of love, the rhythm of life We are close now, you and I Softness and hardness united in one goal We are there now, two quakes, two exhausted and too weak Come now, join with me jc062701

anonymous 10-May-02/6:04 PM
Some people write entire novels of this stuff and get paid. You should consider doing that instead of trying to pass this off as poetry.




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