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Why... (Free verse) by livingcanvas ...die?
...try?
...think?
...expand?
...write?
...move?
...grow?
...share?
...bother?
...run?
...play?
...call?
...graduate?
...continue?
...paint?
...live?
...not?
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Posted: September 1, 2002 9:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 3:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.55 Overall Rank: 13585 Comments:
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Amelia @ 198.146.139.130
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18-Sep-02/12:47 PM
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Lol. Questions we all ask ourselves. This is thoughful.
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livingcanvas @ 66.218.232.109
> Amelia
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18-Sep-02/3:13 PM
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Sadly, I wrote this... and I am well aware of how horrible it really is... Why i don't delete it I just don't know!? But thank you for your comment none the less...
This has to be the dumbest poem ever written or even thought of in the history of bad poem writing. This is ten times worse than a flaming pustule of a pimple poem. This is 10 times as bad as anything I have ever read in my thirty three paltry years. The horror of having to read something so unworthy has made me... ... ... run to the restroom ... ... ... why ... ... why ... ... why ... ... Did yu show this to your mother, teacher, puppy. did you get a gold star? Yes, delete, delete, del....
wow.... now, i am impressed.... i have made the lowest of the low, and for some reason, with this poem, i honestly am not ashamed of that.... i know this poem is horrible... why i don't delete it? hmm.. i guess so others will comment... noone seems to like to leave positive comments... so, i post something so utterly rediculous that you can't avoid smacking the hell out of it.... so.... thank you!
Well there is a clever response: I meant to do that. I did. I did. I like to write crap that is just crap and not crap that is crap but actually makes fun of other crap that is 100 percent crap. Pat on the shoulder for you my boy. And if the poetry is good on this site it gets good ratings and comments; if it is bad, well, same thing in many cases, but in others, it gets what it deserves.
sir, may I dare say...0
horray!! another ill-poem that will even make the children cringe.
priceless...atleast until next year..than i'm sure tara will introduce you to some of her publishing friends and hook you up with a cover letter...then you can be rich and aloof and brilliant..good luck! on the brilliant part..the rest comes with your circle of pikers...
...haven't you posted new poetry?
i do truly hope this was intended in jest... it is a negative contrast to your other postings... your sobriety during composition is questioned...
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