poemranker ::Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL

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Concrete № 47635

Noone really knows

by CHRMEcountryGRL

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

Noone really knows the true feelings your feeling at any moment.. Noone really knows the hurt you feel when your pricked.. Noone really knows the love you feel for another person.. Noone really knows the true colors you see when you open your eyes every morning.. Noone really knows the sadness you feel when you lose something near and dear to you... Noone really knows the fear you feel when you are standing in the shadows and noone is there to hold your hand... Noone really knows the until you share everything you are feeling when you are feeling it, and do not be ashamed of anything you are ever feeling... By CHRMEcountryGRL

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[n/a] INTRANSIT 21-Apr-03/9:23 PM Reply
You need some concrete. To grind off that chrome.
[n/a] horus8 21-Apr-03/11:40 PM Reply
Noone really knows what concrete or dada poetry is.

By someone who does.
[0] hipster flare 1-Oct-03/10:02 AM Reply
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.

Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.