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Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties

by Luzr

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Jul 2003 · Edited 2 Jul 2003 · 14 comments

SD Dream girl Dream away Whilst I Live for today O O O O Shes got plans and wants a fucking future I made her no gaurantees, cause thats just not me Yeah sure dreamer dream your nights away I'll continue living for today

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14 comments

[n/a] DreamerSupreme 2-Jul-03/8:17 AM Reply
Dream my nights away? hrmm. Ok. :)
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom › DreamerSupreme 2-Jul-03/8:32 AM Reply
Nah.. I was thinking dream boat but that'd be too obvious.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › thepinkbunnyofdoom 2-Jul-03/8:41 AM Reply
heh. i cant come up with a good title for this. Maybe Virginal Fantasy.. which i think stinks, but its my poke at it.
[n/a] JoyLuck 2-Jul-03/12:35 PM Reply
aw cute
u even initialed it

Crossroad in my Dream

cuz i thought the top part looked like signs pointing in directions and the bottom is a blob of dirt.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › JoyLuck 2-Jul-03/1:29 PM Reply
Pointing actually in directions with the bottom being a blob of cum called Durt. ;) Yes, i like my rewrite of your stupid comment. heres a new title:

Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties
[n/a] DurtKL › SupremeDreamer 2-Jul-03/1:48 PM Reply
ha
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom › SupremeDreamer 2-Jul-03/4:50 PM Reply
Perfect Title. Thank you and Joyluck. Very good building off his name like that.
[n/a] JoyLuck › thepinkbunnyofdoom 3-Jul-03/12:16 AM Reply
it's so hard to live life with a name called durt :(
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom › JoyLuck 2-Jul-03/4:49 PM Reply
Yours its good but I'm gonna go with dreamer's suggestion.
[n/a] JoyLuck › thepinkbunnyofdoom 3-Jul-03/12:16 AM Reply
supreme's one was good
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 2-Jul-03/12:57 PM Reply
Poopoo?
[n/a] Luzr › Jeremi B. Handrinos 2-Jul-03/4:53 PM Reply
Damn Good. But then I'd have to make the first 4 lines flies.
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 17-Aug-03/6:34 PM Reply
great shape, but a couple typos.
[8] hipster flare 1-Oct-03/9:55 AM Reply
a boat? I like it.