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Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties (Concrete) by Luzr SD
Dream girl
Dream away
Whilst I
Live for today
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Shes got plans and wants a fucking future
I made her no gaurantees, cause thats just not me
Yeah sure dreamer dream your nights away
I'll continue living for today
Up the ladder:
Her bloody diamonds
Down the ladder:
To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.125
Posted: July 2, 2003 7:24 AM PDT; Last modified: July 2, 2003 4:51 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.8716936 Overall Rank: 278 Comments:
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DreamerSupreme @ 66.81.157.100
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2-Jul-03/8:17 AM
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Dream my nights away? hrmm. Ok. :)
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223
> DreamerSupreme
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2-Jul-03/8:32 AM
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Nah.. I was thinking dream boat but that'd be too obvious.
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SupremeDreamer @ 66.81.157.100
> thepinkbunnyofdoom
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2-Jul-03/8:41 AM
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heh. i cant come up with a good title for this. Maybe Virginal Fantasy.. which i think stinks, but its my poke at it.
aw cute
u even initialed it Crossroad in my Dream cuz i thought the top part looked like signs pointing in directions and the bottom is a blob of dirt.
Pointing actually in directions with the bottom being a blob of cum called Durt. ;) Yes, i like my rewrite of your stupid comment. heres a new title:
Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties
ha
Perfect Title. Thank you and Joyluck. Very good building off his name like that.
it's so hard to live life with a name called durt :(
Yours its good but I'm gonna go with dreamer's suggestion.
supreme's one was good
Poopoo?
Damn Good. But then I'd have to make the first 4 lines flies.
great shape, but a couple typos.
a boat? I like it.
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