poemranker ::Pinjur by Shardik

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Haiku № 40975

Pinjur

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Feb 2003 · 16 comments

The lost fold of skin between one's soul and what they thought was a promise. In truth, i am untouchable. In heart, i am god.

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16 comments

[8] Mr Pig 21-Feb-03/9:26 AM Reply
I wish to comment on this and fear the ramnifications for you as some think you as I and that is not the case. However I dont usually curse but fuck them !
This is a great piece of work, keep your chin up and your pen on paper, you grace it my good sir...8
[n/a] Shardik › Mr Pig 21-Feb-03/8:50 PM Reply
Everyone knows horus8's favourite poetess's are shaskowski and razorgrin and z.
[8] Mr Pig 21-Feb-03/9:26 AM Reply
is pinjur also a spice?
[n/a] Shardik › Mr Pig 21-Feb-03/8:46 PM Reply
Mr, Pig, want to hear something funny? at the bottom of this page is a girl hung up on me for singing billy idol karoke nonetheless.
She follows me like the plague mounting attack after attack, stepping on women and children none the better. It's that easy. Except, once i sang billy to a drunk dwarf with a rubber duckie... he kicked me in the balls? life is funny, huh?
[8] spank me baby yeah 21-Feb-03/10:24 AM Reply
BEEF CURTAINS THE NICEST FOLD OF SKIN, BING8
[0] wOrnella Mutiw 21-Feb-03/4:36 PM Reply
I always wanted Pinjur colored wings. Thanks. It's not a spice. Ohhhhh, I just noticed...the secret messages you used to leave for me on poemranker. Carolina's on my mind. Thanks! Your haiku had nothing to do with Pinjur. 0.
[n/a] Shardik › wOrnella Mutiw 21-Feb-03/6:57 PM Reply
Was it suppose to have something to do with pinjur. lol.
[10] horus8 21-Feb-03/6:55 PM Reply
schizophrenics see secret messages everywhere. it's a james talor song, and it was before you were born, and i think it was a folk song before even he played it, just because you went to school there, don't fucking ruin the place for everyone else.lol. There are no messages. i am not mr. pig, but you are clinicaly and most obviously a seriously unstable cuek. Jesus. i have never seen a person light themselves on fire before, impressive, I mean, if you could write, of course.
[0] wOrnella Mutiw › horus8 21-Feb-03/7:03 PM Reply
Yeah, I only lived in NC for 6 yrs. Thanks for letting me know that it was a James Taylor song. So you would leave a random comment Carolina's on my mind after you meet me. Right. After you were stuck to me for 2 weeks straight. Just like you didn't sing to me at that shitty bar on Gower. Please. Haha. Billy Idol. That wasn't for me either? Yes, I bet it was for Nadine.
[n/a] Shardik › wOrnella Mutiw 21-Feb-03/8:47 PM Reply
I've done that more than once let's just say to fags, weirdo's like you, and even alone on a whim.lol. oh, your comment to this is really above on a mr. pigs, though granted i'm not he, i trust him better.
[n/a] Shardik › horus8 21-Feb-03/9:30 PM Reply
I don't know about all that, but i know when i score a good comment here. my phone rings? and yes i hung up, again. Why?
i-do-not-want-a-person-like-you-period-on-any-level-ever. here, in chinese; hokay sa juki she go shai pie nkee ho.
that was basically the same sentence but with emphasise.
Stop calling my house, or cell(wether you can "get the number or not?" [that comment alone of yours? is frightening let me just say that and warn psycology students to pay attention to ttttthese symptoms, it could save your life and your patients]) don't you get it? no comprende? no me, no you, no together. you crazy, you bug, you not trust worthy, you bad..you make big noise go bang bang with mouth all day all night, you no care, all me do not talk to you. why, me no want to.see you nomo.that suppose mean you leave me alone see that how real peoples fuction. get the drift yet?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Shardik 21-Feb-03/10:24 PM Reply
I think you would enjoy www.tubgirl.com.
[n/a] Shardik › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Mar-03/1:54 PM Reply
I played live from the tub already a year or two ago. You are too late. I don't believe an organ would fit for you though. Perhaps you can play my sax? Michael Jost took me. They do that show in Venice beach, but it's called www.bathtubgirl.com

a real fucking skankfest, plus if i recall the acoustics sucked and my guitar string broke or detuned rapidly or some shit like that.
[7] hipster flare 13-Mar-03/9:46 AM Reply
god with a small i. catchy.
[8] Robert K Foster 21-May-03/10:59 AM Reply
in here, you are words and nothingness....
[n/a] Shardik › Robert K Foster 21-May-03/12:34 PM Reply
Your dyslexia is flattering, thankyou.