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Pinjur (Haiku) by Shardik

The lost fold of skin between one's soul and what they thought was a promise. In truth, i am untouchable. In heart, i am god.

Shardik 21-Feb-03/9:30 PM
I don't know about all that, but i know when i score a good comment here. my phone rings? and yes i hung up, again. Why?
i-do-not-want-a-person-like-you-period-on-any-level-ever. here, in chinese; hokay sa juki she go shai pie nkee ho.
that was basically the same sentence but with emphasise.
Stop calling my house, or cell(wether you can "get the number or not?" [that comment alone of yours? is frightening let me just say that and warn psycology students to pay attention to ttttthese symptoms, it could save your life and your patients]) don't you get it? no comprende? no me, no you, no together. you crazy, you bug, you not trust worthy, you bad..you make big noise go bang bang with mouth all day all night, you no care, all me do not talk to you. why, me no want to.see you nomo.that suppose mean you leave me alone see that how real peoples fuction. get the drift yet?




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