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Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku (Haiku) by loneshadow29
life like a candle its flame always burning bright got any water?
Up the ladder: I'm Not A Poet
Down the ladder: Dangers
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5384617
Weighted score: 4.662588
Overall Rank: 12272
Posted: October 25, 2002 8:44 AM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2002 8:44 AM PDT
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[5] Tintagiles @ 198.164.242.171 | 25-Oct-02/9:17 AM | Reply
Amusing.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 216.24.65.85 | 25-Oct-02/4:23 PM | Reply
You gotta let go of that negative energy sometime ,dude. Nice haiku though
[8] New Life Drug @ 64.175.37.54 | 25-Oct-02/5:18 PM | Reply
haha that's awesome
[4] horus8 @ 24.126.117.82 | 26-Oct-02/8:39 AM | Reply
(cherry spoons first attempt at attempting)life like a sandal/the soles protecting your feet/wish i were a snail?
[5] hipster flare @ 209.68.67.7 | 13-Mar-03/9:45 AM | Reply
keep trying. avaoid cliche's that sound like elton john songs.
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