poemranker ::20 most recent comments by horus8 (1381-1400) and replies

Comments byhorus8, 1381–1400 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Dream Girl by LosT SykoPath 11 Jun 2003, 12:02 PM
Naughty.
on -none by LosT SykoPath 11 Jun 2003, 11:59 AM
lol.
on Im Sorry by LosT SykoPath 11 Jun 2003, 11:58 AM
Good god you are a fucking spinner.
on Daddy's Girl by LosT SykoPath 11 Jun 2003, 11:56 AM
Great haiku! 10!
on moment in time by calilegzzz 11 Jun 2003, 11:53 AM
I believe you need to muster your nude form back to the typing table, there are some serious typos and horrible flaws in this poem, but the sentiment was maintained, somehow.
on 5 minutes by Jai 11 Jun 2003, 11:48 AM
You are a supreme ass boil.
on He says by Jai 11 Jun 2003, 11:46 AM
I would say, "go for a long walk on a short pier".
on The first time by Jai 11 Jun 2003, 11:45 AM
No, because your sheets are covered in poop, not blood.
on This guy by Jai 11 Jun 2003, 11:43 AM
You are, not your. Idiot.
replying on "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus 10 Jun 2003, 1:01 PM
Yes, and when he hands him the mint and flees, leaping for cover, like he's in a war? Riveting.
replying on Handy Smurf by Bachus 10 Jun 2003, 12:59 PM
Thank you, and congratulations on your haiku success by the way.
replying on Holiday In Hell by systemofadown 10 Jun 2003, 12:50 PM
I interpret a homerun of shit! Good, very good, very very good. They way you rhymed ass with class and thrill with kill... Stunning, and inventive, and a swim in brain juice? Wow, that's deep.
on Baginga by JoyLuck 10 Jun 2003, 12:46 PM
a waste of typos
on Oil Spill by scitz 10 Jun 2003, 12:42 PM
Milk spill (Free verse) by spitz

Boob sprays clear death
Nipples grow to eager mouths.
Silicon breakfast.
on B-Movie Video Voiceover Guy by spank me baby yeah 10 Jun 2003, 12:32 PM
So.
on Beam reach by INTRANSIT 9 Jun 2003, 11:18 AM
Sound
on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 9 Jun 2003, 11:15 AM
How about I record this?
on one grey dream by crwncka1 9 Jun 2003, 10:58 AM
That, or close to a freeway.
replying on Gloria's stairwell circles up & down by Bachus 8 Jun 2003, 10:52 PM
No.
replying on Moo Gai Pai lover (dedicated to Settle) by Sylvia Bravo 8 Jun 2003, 10:49 PM
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