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Baginga (Free verse) by JoyLuck creepy crawlers in my tummy
wrigling wormies in my pants
little purple shelled peanuts
an elephant eating them out of my hand
papa john's pizza dipping sauce
spread over your dark nipples
spinning around in my chair
with fairies prancing about
waving their dentures in the air
flash movies that make no sense
squirrels flying about
bananas buzz into my ear
bill cosby will die
j-e-l-l-o
Up the ladder:
love
Down the ladder:
Never more
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Posted: June 10, 2003 11:22 AM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2003 11:22 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.7948012 Overall Rank: 13495 Comments:
Brilliant piece of writing.
a waste of typos
Bagina (aka) yeast trolley, mooseknuckle, curtaine o' beif. Bulva.
this is not very good
And you claim I'm gay and write shitty. HaHa, what irony.
since i'm uh really trying here
idiot
Yes, quite apparent, I had hoped for something truely insulting, but seeing as to how You can't write poetry, (trying yeah might help but I doubt it unless you are D.A. or his Heir apparent because your poems do have a mildly similar demeanor to his), I shouldn't be surprised that you either lack the ability to go beyond basic name calling or for the sake of arguement are merely too lazy to do so(in which case why bother responding at all).
Hven't you embarrassed yourself enough with your spectacular gormlessness for one year?
Yes, Yes, Shame, Shame, Poor Retarded me.
I think it is absolutely fantstic...
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wtf....
Got Crack?