poemranker ::Baginga by JoyLuck

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Free verse № 52301

Baginga

by JoyLuck

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jun 2003 · 11 comments

creepy crawlers in my tummy wrigling wormies in my pants little purple shelled peanuts an elephant eating them out of my hand papa john's pizza dipping sauce spread over your dark nipples spinning around in my chair with fairies prancing about waving their dentures in the air flash movies that make no sense squirrels flying about bananas buzz into my ear bill cosby will die j-e-l-l-o

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11 comments

[0] DurtKL 10-Jun-03/11:27 AM Reply
whoa...
wtf....

Got Crack?
[0] baughworm 10-Jun-03/12:14 PM Reply
Brilliant piece of writing.
[6] horus8 10-Jun-03/12:46 PM Reply
a waste of typos
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 10-Jun-03/3:51 PM Reply
Bagina (aka) yeast trolley, mooseknuckle, curtaine o' beif. Bulva.
[0] baughworm 15-Jun-03/11:37 PM Reply
this is not very good
[2] thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Jun-03/3:54 AM Reply
And you claim I'm gay and write shitty. HaHa, what irony.
[n/a] JoyLuck › thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Jun-03/5:40 AM Reply
since i'm uh really trying here
idiot

[2] thepinkbunnyofdoom › JoyLuck 18-Jun-03/11:00 PM Reply
Yes, quite apparent, I had hoped for something truely insulting, but seeing as to how You can't write poetry, (trying yeah might help but I doubt it unless you are D.A. or his Heir apparent because your poems do have a mildly similar demeanor to his), I shouldn't be surprised that you either lack the ability to go beyond basic name calling or for the sake of arguement are merely too lazy to do so(in which case why bother responding at all).
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Jun-03/7:04 AM Reply
Hven't you embarrassed yourself enough with your spectacular gormlessness for one year?
[2] thepinkbunnyofdoom › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Jun-03/10:41 PM Reply
Yes, Yes, Shame, Shame, Poor Retarded me.
[10] DJCARTER 18-Jul-03/1:07 AM Reply
I think it is absolutely fantstic...