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Baginga (Free verse) by JoyLuck

creepy crawlers in my tummy wrigling wormies in my pants little purple shelled peanuts an elephant eating them out of my hand papa john's pizza dipping sauce spread over your dark nipples spinning around in my chair with fairies prancing about waving their dentures in the air flash movies that make no sense squirrels flying about bananas buzz into my ear bill cosby will die j-e-l-l-o

thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Jun-03/11:00 PM
Yes, quite apparent, I had hoped for something truely insulting, but seeing as to how You can't write poetry, (trying yeah might help but I doubt it unless you are D.A. or his Heir apparent because your poems do have a mildly similar demeanor to his), I shouldn't be surprised that you either lack the ability to go beyond basic name calling or for the sake of arguement are merely too lazy to do so(in which case why bother responding at all).




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