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love (Free verse) by little_angel_maria I'm looking for love,
but i can't find the right one, to be my love.
I'm so pissed at the fact,
that I can't find the right guy for me oh god.
I wish someone would sweep me off my feet and sing to me all night,
throw me a seranade and give me red roses.
Oh how I wish.
I just want to fall in love,
with someone who knows how to respect,
and doesn't go by my looks, or just wants to snog me and then goes.
I want to be in love,
I want a man to kiss me all night long and tell me how much he loves me,
and tell me how beautifull I am.
I want to be in love oh how i wish.
Up the ladder:
wizard master
Down the ladder:
Baginga
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.357143
Posted: October 21, 2002 10:29 AM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2002 10:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.7989752 Overall Rank: 13494 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.96
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21-Oct-02/4:34 PM
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What a pathetic fantasy. It's not even an poeme. Good effort!!
Don't they teach grammar in the schools in England?
I am the right guy!! :o)
you won't get love because you are a bad person. buy a dildo and cut your losses.
om gok thanks for elling me that i suck :(
Yeah. That sort of thing tends to happen at POEMERANKER, a site expressly designed for THE RANKING OF POEMES.
the best part was the snog, and than you went no where with it...shame really.
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