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The first time (Free verse) by Jai Your first boyfriend, so happy never felt better.
Your first kiss, wow! even happier than before.
Your first time, are you really that happy?
Up the ladder:
All the things i hate
Down the ladder:
lost it all('ego' totally crushed)
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Posted: June 10, 2003 4:36 PM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2003 4:36 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.44372 Overall Rank: 12908 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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11-Jun-03/11:45 AM
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No, because your sheets are covered in poop, not blood.
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Robert K Foster @ 66.66.214.253
> horus8
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11-Jun-03/4:01 PM
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Excellent response.
I was. thanks for spoiling it. the ambiguity has ruined the excitement. one word for you:
STOLID. look it up. 113 view(s)
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