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Free verse № 52349

The first time

by Jai

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

Your first boyfriend, so happy never felt better. Your first kiss, wow! even happier than before. Your first time, are you really that happy?

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3 comments

[n/a] horus8 11-Jun-03/11:45 AM Reply
No, because your sheets are covered in poop, not blood.
[1] Robert K Foster › horus8 11-Jun-03/4:01 PM Reply
Excellent response.
[1] Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/4:02 PM Reply
I was. thanks for spoiling it. the ambiguity has ruined the excitement. one word for you:
STOLID. look it up.