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Do You Need Me? (Free verse) by DaRkMoOnLuVeR Do you need me?
Of course you do
Everybody always does
It's just...I don't know
I feel like I don't
I know YOU don't care
But I do
You really should
Without ME
You'd still be invisible!
But, really?
Do you need me?
I have to seriously know
I have a problem with you
Because you HAVE problems
But you still need and use me
But I'll always be there for you...
I don't know why
But I will...if YOU need ME
Up the ladder:
lost it all('ego' totally crushed)
Down the ladder:
I miss my gummibear.
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Posted: March 7, 2005 8:21 PM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2005 8:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.44372 Overall Rank: 12905 Comments:
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Rainbow_chaser @ 64.229.170.87
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8-Mar-05/9:15 PM
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Im not sure, i think i have an issue with the thought that you think someone would be "invisable without you.... like thats crap for sure, and be honest with yourself here we ALL have problems, and if you feel so used and mis-needed then why?? why?
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