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I miss my gummibear. (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I dream of your soft kisses during the day. I almost feel your lips touch mine. These heavenly images sweep me into a joyous limbo. Where you did not leave me. Then I return to this shadowed world. You are not here. I become sorrowed, and lonely Why did you leave me? I understand it is your dream, But the pain of each day until you return is unbareable. I'm dying already and you haven't even been gone five days Baby I miss you. The best memories of you and I feel ages past. If only you knew that everything seems lost and grey with out you.

Up the ladder: Do You Need Me?
Down the ladder: Disbelief is Deadly

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.33333334
Weighted score: 4.44372
Overall Rank: 12911
Posted: May 19, 2004 2:31 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2004 2:31 PM PDT
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[1] edpeterson @ 68.79.27.79 | 19-May-04/3:47 PM | Reply
oi vey. whelp, here is a spin>>>>>>1 sorry, i cannot control the arbitrary nature of the spin.
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