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I miss my gummibear. (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I dream of your soft kisses during the day.
I almost feel your lips touch mine.
These heavenly images sweep me into a joyous limbo.
Where you did not leave me.
Then I return to this shadowed world.
You are not here.
I become sorrowed, and lonely
Why did you leave me?
I understand it is your dream,
But the pain of each day until you return is unbareable.
I'm dying already and you haven't even been gone five days
Baby I miss you.
The best memories of you and I feel ages past.
If only you knew that everything seems lost and grey
with out you.
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Posted: May 19, 2004 2:31 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2004 2:31 PM PDT
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