poemranker ::I miss my gummibear. by Freethinker1602

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Free verse № 102641

I miss my gummibear.

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 May 2004 · 1 comment

I dream of your soft kisses during the day. I almost feel your lips touch mine. These heavenly images sweep me into a joyous limbo. Where you did not leave me. Then I return to this shadowed world. You are not here. I become sorrowed, and lonely Why did you leave me? I understand it is your dream, But the pain of each day until you return is unbareable. I'm dying already and you haven't even been gone five days Baby I miss you. The best memories of you and I feel ages past. If only you knew that everything seems lost and grey with out you.

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[1] edpeterson 19-May-04/3:47 PM Reply
oi vey. whelp, here is a spin>>>>>>1 sorry, i cannot control the arbitrary nature of the spin.