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The first time
(
Free verse
) by
Jai
Your first boyfriend, so happy never felt better. Your first kiss, wow! even happier than before. Your first time, are you really that happy?
Robert K Foster
11-Jun-03/4:02 PM
I was. thanks for spoiling it. the ambiguity has ruined the excitement. one word for you:
STOLID. look it up.
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