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The first time (Free verse) by Jai

Your first boyfriend, so happy never felt better. Your first kiss, wow! even happier than before. Your first time, are you really that happy?

Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/4:02 PM
I was. thanks for spoiling it. the ambiguity has ruined the excitement. one word for you:
STOLID. look it up.




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