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All the things i hate

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Apr 2003 · 5 comments

I hate the way you are always right I hate the way i keep thinking of you all night i hate myself for not being able to resist your smile i hate myself for missing you every while i hate the way i feel when you kiss me i hate the way i know you just want me and that sometimes you just seem to hate me i hate the way you don't care i hate it that every time i need you,you are not there only you can make it right but it's only who always starts the fight i hate the way i love you and that to myself i can't even be true

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5 comments

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 11-Apr-03/9:52 PM Reply

Somebody has been to block buster recently. Sounds a little too close to the movie. There are only 9 I hates tho. Why not add one and be that much closer?

[n/a] Mr Pig (again) 12-Apr-03/1:39 PM Reply

My dear chap lose this, its just not dandy.
i hate it that every time i need you,you are not there
only you can make it right
but it's only who always starts the fight
i hate the way i love you
and that to myself i can't even be true

Try this as a lyric, make it effective, show your vitriol and keep us all engaged.

Hope you dont mind but I will vote later when you maybe have edited it.

Cheerio for now.

[0] Moniquesuvee 9-Sep-03/7:58 AM Reply

Ok come on, I've seen the movie "Ten Things I Hate About You Too". . .this is kind of a rip-off of that

[n/a] SomeKindofPoet 21-May-04/12:31 AM Reply

Hm...reminds me of "Ten Things I Hate About You"

Good idea, however, I'm not much on free verse unless it has a rhythm to it...that would be my advice.

-SKoP

[1] cuddlytiger17 21-May-04/10:12 PM Reply

This is waaay too much like the lines from the movie Ten Things I Hate About You!!!!