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All the things i hate (Free verse) by Mutant_X I hate the way you are always right
I hate the way i keep thinking of you all night
i hate myself for not being able to resist your smile
i hate myself for missing you every while
i hate the way i feel when you kiss me
i hate the way i know you just want me
and that sometimes you just seem to hate me
i hate the way you don't care
i hate it that every time i need you,you are not there
only you can make it right
but it's only who always starts the fight
i hate the way i love you
and that to myself i can't even be true
Up the ladder:
help
Down the ladder:
The first time
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Posted: April 11, 2003 3:52 PM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2003 3:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.44372 Overall Rank: 12902 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37
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11-Apr-03/9:52 PM
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Somebody has been to block buster recently. Sounds a little too close to the movie. There are only 9 I hates tho. Why not add one and be that much closer?
My dear chap lose this, its just not dandy.
i hate it that every time i need you,you are not there only you can make it right but it's only who always starts the fight i hate the way i love you and that to myself i can't even be true Try this as a lyric, make it effective, show your vitriol and keep us all engaged. Hope you dont mind but I will vote later when you maybe have edited it. Cheerio for now.
Ok come on, I've seen the movie "Ten Things I Hate About You Too". . .this is kind of a rip-off of that
Hm...reminds me of "Ten Things I Hate About You"
Good idea, however, I'm not much on free verse unless it has a rhythm to it...that would be my advice. -SKoP
This is waaay too much like the lines from the movie Ten Things I Hate About You!!!!
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