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All the things i hate (Free verse) by Mutant_X

I hate the way you are always right I hate the way i keep thinking of you all night i hate myself for not being able to resist your smile i hate myself for missing you every while i hate the way i feel when you kiss me i hate the way i know you just want me and that sometimes you just seem to hate me i hate the way you don't care i hate it that every time i need you,you are not there only you can make it right but it's only who always starts the fight i hate the way i love you and that to myself i can't even be true

SomeKindofPoet 21-May-04/12:31 AM
Hm...reminds me of "Ten Things I Hate About You"

Good idea, however, I'm not much on free verse unless it has a rhythm to it...that would be my advice.

-SKoP




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