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All the things i hate (Free verse) by Mutant_X

I hate the way you are always right I hate the way i keep thinking of you all night i hate myself for not being able to resist your smile i hate myself for missing you every while i hate the way i feel when you kiss me i hate the way i know you just want me and that sometimes you just seem to hate me i hate the way you don't care i hate it that every time i need you,you are not there only you can make it right but it's only who always starts the fight i hate the way i love you and that to myself i can't even be true

Mr Pig (again) 12-Apr-03/1:39 PM
My dear chap lose this, its just not dandy.
i hate it that every time i need you,you are not there
only you can make it right
but it's only who always starts the fight
i hate the way i love you
and that to myself i can't even be true

Try this as a lyric, make it effective, show your vitriol and keep us all engaged.

Hope you dont mind but I will vote later when you maybe have edited it.

Cheerio for now.




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