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Haiku № 52393

Daddy's Girl

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

You have his nose. You have his fingers and his toes. You both are funny you both are smart, You both like to keep people happy with all your heart. You both love going 160 on a tight turn. You both have that feeling, an adrenaline burn. You like going to see movies that are comedy and action. Extra butter on the popcorn to fit your satisfaction. He's had fun with you from the day you were born. Being away from you make him feel a bit torn. He put up with temper tantrums and all your hissy fits. I'm surprised he hasn't strangled you or at least blown you to bits. No, he's supported you to this very day. He's loved you and nurtured you in every single way. He was there when you first tied your shoe. And there so you could tell him you learned something new. He's made you happy and spoiled you rotten. You love to death everything that you've gotten. Because you're still daddy's little girl. And he's the best dad in the world.

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3 comments

[10] horus8 11-Jun-03/11:56 AM Reply
Great haiku! 10!
[0] Robert K Foster › horus8 11-Jun-03/3:49 PM Reply
your wit made me laugh. out loud. honestly.
[0] Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/3:49 PM Reply
A nice father's day poem. however, not a haiku. you have about 195 too many syllables.