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"Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. (Haiku) by Bachus The poor waitor's stare.
Making love to my shell fish.
Moist crotchless napkin.
Butter & Lemons.
The squirt of hot cocktail sauce.
A wafer thin mint.
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Posted: April 8, 2003 1:32 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 5:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.090909 Overall Rank: 1152 Comments:
JUMBO SHRIMPE LOSES TO KING PRAWNE
KING'S PRAWNE TO KING'S PRAWNE 4
Queen's Knight to the lost square on the underside of the board, CHICKMOLTE!
Love the first part. Not crazy about the second part. don't like the fat lady. But what the hellmp.
"One waifer thin mint"
How about that instead?
How about 'Burning my nob'? No? Oh well...
No, no, no, no, no, no...
Yes. Yes, use that instead. :-)
PLAH!
meh. myabe it's because i don't really like haikus much
I'm not in the prawn(e) posse but i line 3 is to die 9 lives for.
For making me snigger 8 (I refuse to laugh its far too wanky)
Ahh and line 2, yes I recall a japanese waiter in a sushi bar with 3 fingers 'making love to my fish' too, he made so much more effort than the others.
Hmm yes I feel a 'fortune cookie moment' coming on.
Oh ho, that's a cool one to read :)
No I couldn't eat another bite. oh sir, it is only a wafer thin mint. it's wafer thein, oh, all right. munch grumble stretch BOOM!
Yes, and when he hands him the mint and flees, leaping for cover, like he's in a war? Riveting.
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for him, oreganato--
a fingerbowl, please!!