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"Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. (Haiku) by Bachus

The poor waitor's stare. Making love to my shell fish. Moist crotchless napkin. Butter & Lemons. The squirt of hot cocktail sauce. A wafer thin mint.

scitz 4-Jun-03/9:24 AM
I'm not in the prawn(e) posse but i line 3 is to die 9 lives for.

For making me snigger 8 (I refuse to laugh its far too wanky)




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