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"Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. (Haiku) by Bachus

The poor waitor's stare. Making love to my shell fish. Moist crotchless napkin. Butter & Lemons. The squirt of hot cocktail sauce. A wafer thin mint.

Bill Z Bub 8-Apr-03/3:23 PM
Love the first part. Not crazy about the second part. don't like the fat lady. But what the hellmp.




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